Earth Searcher (that untitled story) Chapter Two

Submitted by E on Tue, 06/09/2009 - 22:35

Chapter Two
Awakening

I stare around me. The main yard isn't much to look at. It is much too dry for any grass to come through, so it is bland and hard. Master G'ueylue leads us towards the middle yard and orders Master P'elou (his son) over to us.
"Kneel," commands Master P'elou sharply. I kneel, but T'eyltar remains on her feet.
"What are you doing?" I hiss quietly out of the side of my mouth.
"Making a point," she mutters back.
Horror-struck, I remain on all fours.
"I said kneel!" snarls Master P'elou.
"I do not believe that I was born to take your orders," says T'eyltar cooly.
My mouth drops open. This is so uncharacteristic for T'eyltar, what is she thinking?
I dare to glance up at Master G'ueylue, then quickly look away. I have never seen him look angrier. His beady little eyes seem to be popping out of his round head, and I swear is face is scarlet.
"Slave, what is your name?" barks Master G'ueylue to T'eyltar.
"T'eyltar," says T'eyltar matter-of-factly. That is another thing never to do around Master G'ueylue.
"Kneel now," says Master in his most intimidating voice.
I glance up to T'eyltar, who has her eyes narrowed to slits and her hands set defiently on her hips.
"No." She says the word coldly, slowly, with so much hatred and remorse that I can see that even Master G'ueylue is taken aback.
"P'elou, get the whip," says Master G'ueylue, not taking his eyes off of T'eyltar. T'eyltar never takes her eyes off of him.
Master P'elou hands his father the whip, and Master G'ueylue comes around and slashes T'eyltar hard on the back with it.
T'eyltar doesn't even wince.
"That didn't hurt."
I gasp, "T'eyltar!" and bolt up from my hands and knees.
"Get back down, Girl," snarls Master P'elou.
I ignore him, for I am busied with fussing at T'eyltar.
"What are you thinking?"
"I need to make a point."
"What point? That the slave who speaks out always gets whipped harder?"
"No! That the slave who speaks out is the one who's right!"
"T'eyltar!"
"J'uniea!"
"SLAVES!" shouts Master G'ueylue.
T'eyltar and I turn to face him. His hands are balled into fists and are shaking, and his entire body, it seems, is a bright scarlet.
"I HAVE NEVER, EVER BEEN SO DISRESPECTED BY MY SLAVES! I AM ASHAMED THAT YOU LIVE IN MY ESTABLISHMENT! I AM KICKING YOU DISREPECTFUL GRIME OUT OF MY HOME AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!" roars Master G'ueylue. He breaths heavily afterwards, and I can see that even P'elou seems shocked.
I am frozen in place, still cringing. There is utterly hateful silence filling the air, and it frightens me a little.
I glance at T'eyltar beside me. I know that she is trying to hide it, but her eyes dance with the upmost glee. I should be happy, but I am afraid. What will I do once I'm not here?

Author's age when written
12
Genre
Notes

I came up with a title!!! HA!!!
BTW, here are pronounciations for the names I made up:
T'eyltar: Tee-el-tar
J'uniea: Jay-oo-in-ea
G'ueylue: Goo-whey-loo
P'elou: Pee-el-oo

Comments

what is master going to do? is the son just as bad? or does he secretly want to help the slaves? where will they go? hurry and do the next section!!!
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"The music is all around you. All you have to do...is listen." August Rush, one of the BEST movies EVER!!!

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

Lol, I will be writing :)
BTW, I LOVE the movie August Rush. Awesome movie :D

~Erin~

"Don't put your wand there, boy!" roared Moody. "What if it ignited? Better wizards than you have lost buttocks, you know!" -Mad-Eye Moody

"I am who I am, and nothing's gonna change me." -Adam Lambert

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

me too. I like your signature, Mad-eye's. so sad. he dies!!! i think there should be a separate book about him. I have a feeling it twill be good!
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"The music is all around you. All you have to do...is listen." August Rush, one of the BEST movies EVER!!!

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

NOOO!!! I forgot that Mad-Eye dies. He rocks, though. I'm re-reading the series for the third time, and was successful in reading the first four books in one week :D. Now I'm on my favorite, Order of the Phoenix.
You're right, a seperate book about the adventures of Mad-Eye Moody.....That would be good!

~Erin~

"Don't put your wand there, boy!" roared Moody. "What if it ignited? Better wizards than you have lost buttocks, you know!" -Mad-Eye Moody

"I am who I am, and nothing's gonna change me." -Adam Lambert

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I read them all the time! i have the last three and i can't count the amount of times i've read them!!!

"Yes, I have a godfather," said Harry brightly. "He was my mum and dad's best friend. He's a convicted murderer, but he's broken out of wizarding prison and now he's on the run. He still likes to stay in touch with me, though...keep up with my news...check if I'm happy..." Harry Potter

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

I'm so busy......Otherwise I'd be reading them like every week. My faves (I love them all!!) are Prisoner of Azkaban, Order of the Phoenix (though after Sirius died, I cried till the middle of the last chapter), and The Deathly Hallows. I cried about Snape and Lily....That was SOOO sweet!!!

~Erin~

Snape took the page bearing Lily's signature, and her love, and tucked it inside his robes. Then he ripped in two the photograph he was also holding, so that he kept the part where Lily laughed, throwing the portion showing James and Harry..AWW

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond