Truthful lying
Wild insanity
Lost humanity
Take the reality
Cold practicality
Throw it away
Lead it astray
Ice cold laughs
Overgrown paths
World of out there
No longer care
Leave me to my madness
Comments
Thanks. Funny, this one
Thanks. Funny, this one wasn't even hard to rhyme; sometimes I have trouble with that and I just go with free verse.
"Courage is being scared to death and saddling up anyway." - John Wayne
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
Nice
Nice flow
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"There's a differnce between food and a meal."
-My bro and I have no idea what it means either
Thanks! "Courage is being
Thanks!
"Courage is being scared to death and saddling up anyway." - John Wayne
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
I really like this! The way
I really like this! The way the final line is by itself, with no rhyme, makes it sound like a bitter pronouncement. (Not that I'm suggesting you feel that way yourself - I like writing sad poetry sometimes too!) :)
(I like The Brit's signature.) ;)
Maybe it is a bitter
Maybe it is a bitter pronouncement! >-D
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
That's a really cool poem. A
That's a really cool poem. A little depressing....in a good way. :) I like how it rhymes. Very good!
~~~^@
Katie:-)
"We never need to be economical in our imaginations, thank heaven."
-Anne Blythe, "Anne of Ingleside"
Katie:-)
"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS
Thanks! I like depressing
Thanks! I like depressing things. I am the MASTER of depressing things. Mwahahahahahahah!!!
"Oh lovely snowball, packed with care
Smack a head that's unaware.
Then with freezing ice to spare
Melt and soak through underwear!
Fly straight and true, hit hard and square.
This, oh snowball, is my prayer." - Calvin, from Calvin and Hobbes
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
Sorry, in a slightly wierd
Sorry, in a slightly wierd mood right now.:-)
"Oh lovely snowball, packed with care
Smack a head that's unaware.
Then with freezing ice to spare
Melt and soak through underwear!
Fly straight and true, hit hard and square.
This, oh snowball, is my prayer." - Calvin, from Calvin and Hobbes
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
I like it. Also the
I like it. Also the simpleness of the title, and the way it rhyms. Very good, very good.
"...And I'm Lukas, his evil spawn." my brother introducing himself, after my dad.