The Stranger

Submitted by Taylor on Wed, 01/28/2009 - 22:12

The cafe is empty. Or nearly so. For all ten tables, there are only two men and a woman. The younger man of the two, dressed in a pinstripe suit, grey slacks, and leather shoes, is certainly here on business. A book rests on the table in front of him, cracked open about two hundred pages in. He appears distracted, agitated, a little nervous. Once he took out his phone and made a call. The voice on the other line, faint and obscured, was that of a woman. A girlfriend? His wife? A boss?

He looks about the room frequently, curiously, as if in need of rescuing from the dry subject matter before him. Now he is taking notes in a notebook. A student at the university, perhaps? His hair is jet black, trimmed short and plain, his skin white, and his face is of a fair complexion. His chin is endowed with a short, black moustache, which hesitantly creeps up to sit below his lip. Probably in his mid- to late-20s, I should presume. His voice, as he spoke to the woman on the phone, was quiet, articulate, and controlled.

Two black ladies work at the coffeebar, making drinks for the steady flow of customers that come and go. The parking lot is full, and it is an overcast day, not raining, but having just rained the night before. Patches of ice cling to the grass overshadowed by buildings and trees. The pale, naked limbs of oaks and the needles of the pines glisten with ice. The sun is nice and the wind tolerable, though many a person walks in bundled in coats, gloves, and a scarf.

Just now the businessman has stood up, preparing to leave. He has closed his book, and now I catch the title. "Liberal Fascism: The Secret History of the American Left" by Jonah Goldberg, which I learn later was published by Doubleday in January, 2008. So it seems that my stranger is a student of politics, and the history of politics in particular.

The time is 2:30 in the afternoon. It is a Wednesday. Too late for a lunch break, but too early to be off work. As far as I know, the university is not on break. Is he unemployed, perhaps? One of the many jobless that have flooded the streets after the colapse of the local and national economy? But if so, would he not be in search of a job?

Now he has gone, and a Chinese woman has come to sit at his table. Maybe he left for a job interview at 3? That would explain why he appeared nervous. And why he was wearing a suit. But then again, I could be terribly mistaken. It could be that he played hookey from school for the day to meet up with a political organization for a rally. Or his father's adopted uncle just passed away. Or any number of things. To be honest, I could ask these questions all day of myself and not once arrive at a solid answer. Sooner or later, I must tell myself that he is a stranger, this is a cafe, and I am a writer, far too curious for my own good.

Author's age when written
19
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Comments

I love this, Taylor. It's simple, real, a great piece. :)
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"Elves and Dragons! Cabbages and potatoes are better for me and you. Don't go getting mixed up in the business of your betters, or you'll land in trouble too big for you." — Hamfast Gamgee (the Gaffer)

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

I do that all the time. Just stare at a person I don't know and wonder about their life. Sometimes they are the inspiration for stories.
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I personally predict that te world will come craching to a halt if you don't forward this to 50 Gazillion people by noon tomorow!!
-me (in parody of a chain e-mail)

His name is Perry Andrew Davis, he's twenty-three, birthday March 12, he's five feet nine inches tall, has a cat even though he isn't supposed to have animals in his apartment, and his favorite food is oatmeal. He's either a lawyer or--no, no, never mind, I know what he is, he's a writer! And the phone call was his mother who lives in Montana wondering about either his mail address or his Aunt Jess....I don't know, something like that; she was talking really quickly. I don't know why he was nervous though, he's usually quite calm....

"A wizard is never late, nor is he early; he arrives presicely when he means to." Gandalf

Great essay, Taylor! I'm glad I'm not the only one who's "far too curious for my own good." : )

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"I had fainted, unless I had believed to see the goodness of the LORD in the land of the living." Psalm 27:13

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!

I went to the airport today, and saw a lot of people that I wondered about. I wondered if they were going to a meeting (a thought which would make sense to get from the little black and brown suitcases they were carrying) or if they were just going to a friend's. Some were probably moving to this country or something like that. So many things that could be happening and so many people that those things are happening to.

"A wizard is never late, nor is he early; he arrives presicely when he means to." Gandalf

Thanks for all the feedback! I hadn't expected this one to be that popular cause it was so simple. I guess not! Yeah, I do this alot, watching ppl. I must have gotten into the habit working at the grocery store, where you're around thousands of people every day. I like it, cause I get to use my intuition. It's like solving a problem but never knowing if your answer is right or not. It's fun!

This was fun to read. :D I read it awhile ago, and came back to it just now. Sounds like something I would do...:P

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa