With love
With love, I sit here
Love is contagious in my hands
All my friends want the disease
I want to make it die
The feeling is disgusting
I loath it
Although I hate it, there is one man I do truly love
But my mother loathes him
She wants me to marry a man she picked out, for no good reason
Every night in my cubby, I sit in my bunk bed, singing Alicia, my 4 year old sister, to sleep
Love drowns in my dreams
I wake up
The man I truly love, is saying goodbye.
Comments
I enjoyed this! I read this
I enjoyed this! I read this and when I got to the end I was like "wow that's sad" and then I saw that a nine year old wrote it! Well done
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I personally predict that the world will come crashing to a halt if you don't forward this to 50 Gazillion people by noon tomorow!!
-me (in parody of a chain e-mail)
This is so good. Kind of
This is so good. Kind of sad, but still really good.
"Here are the beauties which pierce like swords or burn like cold iron." C.S.Lewis
"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died. Rather we should thank God such men lived."
General George S. Patton
Ok, I don't want to start
Ok, I don't want to start WW4 (WW3 was in lily,) But I have something to say that is not...very nice.Your a VERY good writer but dude do you live in some world were the sky is black most of the time. And is your guardian named Count Olaf? Really this doesn't make any sence. How about you write something happy or something?
Nate-Dude
N-D. She can write whatever
N-D. She can write whatever she likes. If she feels that she writes depressing things better than happy, she can write that. It's her choice NOT yours! Let her write what she feels she is best at, or what she would like......Shush....
Sorry if this offends you.
"Here are the beauties which pierce like swords or burn like cold iron." C.S.Lewis
"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died. Rather we should thank God such men lived."
General George S. Patton
Sorry. your right. But i'm
Sorry. your right. But i'm still not sure if God would like us writing JUST sad things. Sad things are great! If we always wrote happy things, we would all be some what...Unrealistic. But He gave us many blessings. We sould be greatful for that. Jaci, If you don't want to write happy stuff, just let us know that you're not serious. (If you are I'm very sorry for you.)Airlia, Yes your post was like a slap in the face, but that's a good thing. thanks.
P.S. Just so you know criticim alwas wecome on my storys. It will make them better. If you would like to get even you know how. (But praise is twice as welcome!)
Nate-Dude
How terribly sad! I like
How terribly sad! I like it!
"It's not who you are underneath, but what you do that defines you." from Batman Begins