I shall begin by saying: This is not part of the story. I simply thought I should fill you in on the way things work so that you were terribly confused when you started reading. First, I will list the characters for you(along with their descriptions and such). Then, I will explain the situation. After that, I will submit this so that you may give me your opinion on weather or not it seems interesting enough for me to continue. Kay? Kay.
Character list-
Name: Eileen Harviondell
Race: Human
Status: The Oldest Princess and heir to the throne.
Age: Sixteen
Looks: Blond, curly hair that falls to just below her shoulders, and cornflower blue eyes. She is around 5'4" and very slim.
Personality: In a word, bubbly. She is almost always optimistic, and very up-beat. Affectionat, and compationate.(Most of the time...)
Name: Amelie Harviondell
Race: Human
Staus: The Queen
Age: Around Forty-five
Looks: Once beatuiful, her red curles fall to aproimatly to the middle of her back. Her face is wrinkled around her green eyes. She is thin, but not quite as slim as Elieen.
Personality: As with most red-heads, she has a fierce temper. When the queen tells you something is to be done, you do it. No arguments, no objections. Just do it. She overly protective of her children. She would sacrifice herself before she put them in danger.
Name: Rosealie Harviondell
Race: Human
Status: The Youngest Princess
Age:Five
Looks: Her curly blond hair falling just below her shoulders, she looks like a minerature model of her sister. She too has the cornflower blue eyes they inherited from their father, and is very slim. A mini Ellie.
Personality: Sweet and adorible. She follows her sister every where, doing all that she can to be just like her. Monkey see monkey do.
Name: Claire
Status: The Shop keeper's daughter
Age: Sixteen
Looks: Long brown hair that flows down to below her bottom and dark brown eyes. She has more meat on her bones that Ellie, but not that much more. She's still thin.
Personality: Quiet and thoughtful. Always thinks before she speaks. Wise beond her years, yet still able to act as a normal sixteen-year-old girl.
Name: Carlisle
Race: Vampire
Status: Can not be revealed
Age: Unknown
Looks: Bleach blond hair along with brown eyes, and infinatly pale skin. Very handsome. He is around 6'2".
Personality: Cold and distant. Few can truely penitrate the stone cold wall he has built around his heart.
Name: Esme
Race: Vampire
Status: Vampire Queen
Age: Unknown
Looks: Pale and thin, her face is almost always expressionless. Her dirty-blond hair contrasts deeply with her with her pale skin, as do her dark brown eyes. She was once beautiful, but that, as with most thing, has faded with age.
Personality: In a word, icy.
((There were a few characters I did not include in this, such as: Thelma the nursery maid, Emmett the castle guard, and Jasper the carrage driver.))
What would be written on the back if this was a book/My introcuction/The explanation-
Princess Eileen Harviondell lives in a very different world that our own. Amenadey is practically overflowing with mythical creatues. Unicorns, giants, dragons, elves, goblins, vampires, you name it. But the vampires are begining to rebel. For as long as anyone can remember, humans have reigned, and the vampires are tired of it. With war on the horizon, Eileen is confined to the castel. With nothing but her studies to entertain her, she begins searching. Not for anyhting in particualar, but something, someone, anyone, anything that's not her mother, her sister, or any of the castel guards. What will she find? Love? Hate? Romance? Victory? Heart-break? Wisdom? I guess we'll find out....
Comments
Sorry Read it like two days
Sorry
Read it like two days ago
but didn't post
i think it sounds interesting
but i don't know all that much on vampires
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
you should write more, it
you should write more,
it sounds like it has
potential
"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca
Yeah....I want to improve my
Yeah....I want to improve my style before I go any further with it.
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I think you should write
I think you should write more.
"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca
So you
So you said.
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Emily-Smileygirl (not verified)
Fri, 01/11/2008 - 14:43
In reply to Yeah....I want to improve my by Megan
Same here! I'm in desprate
Same here! I'm in desprate need to improve my style!
Wow!!!! Wait have you heard
Wow!!!! Wait have you heard of a series where a human falls in love with the vampire?
Fri, 01/11/2008 - 05:26
In reply to Wow!!!! Wait have you heard by Emily-Smileygirl (not verified)
Uhm....It's called Twilight,
Uhm....It's called Twilight, and it happens to be my favorite series.
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Totally snoring!
BOOOORRRRRRRINNNNNNGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are such a little snob!
You are such a little snob! Why don't you just go and hang out with Carley and Brianne if you're going to act like them!
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Maybe I will!!!! It was a joke vampire freak! Maybe you should just go suck some blood!!!!!!!!!!!!
Woahhhhhhh, hold it! Stop!
Woahhhhhhh, hold it! Stop! Hey, are any of you guys logged in the message board?
Anonymous
Wed, 01/23/2008 - 20:13
In reply to Woahhhhhhh, hold it! Stop! by Emily-Smileygirl (not verified)
Hmmm...
I'm not! Are you?
Yeah...I'm
Yeah...I'm not.
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DUH!!!
THAT'S given! I know what it is.... it's like the phbber thingy except it's for apricotpie not books about warrior cats.....
~eMiLy~
Opinions please,
Opinions please, people.=)
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