Close your eyes and dance with me
Down the God-hewn river of time
Watch with me, come and see
Gaze on each face
Passing by as if in line
What I wouldn’t give to have seen
This land, my land,
My America, so pristine
Waiting to be settled, to be loved
What I wouldn’t do to stand
Side by side with those first few
Those brave ones who gazed
Wonderingly, and I wonder if they knew
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Wonderful poem! great job.
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"I like the second scenario better-- you know, the one where nobody dies."
--my friend Amanda
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Wow! Your good. You know the part where it said something about wanting to see America before it was settled (least I think that's what you were saying)? I have thought about that so many times. Like hundreds of years ago what was where my house was. How in the world did they their stuff over all the rocks and various plants.
“For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.” Audrey Hepburn
Hey there!
So glad you joined! I love it when we add another AWESOME writer to our ranks! And the three poems you posted were great. I loved all three of them (especially this one).
~Mary
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"Let the high praises of God be in their mouths, and a two-edged sword in their hand."
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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!
Hi, all
Thanks, Mary. I wrote this poem for Vision Forum's "Jamestown 400" trasure hunt thingy...was that two years ago? Or only one...I forget. lol
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"I am a dreamer, take me higher, open the sky up, start a fire...I beleive, even if it's just a dream." -Bethany Dillon
love it!
hey, i love this poem! great job!! and welcome here to apricotpie. lookin' forward to reading more by you.
~Paula
~I will sing praise unto the Lord God of Israel~ (Judges 5:3b)