Pellias Upon the Fields

Submitted by Bernadette on Sat, 10/11/2008 - 17:09

Upon the glistening fields, lush and green
There his yellow coat shown, like sun’s glow

Swirling brown mane, pawing white hooves
A brown hidden face, great muscles that arch

His flowing forelock, upon white shining blaze
Swerving shoulders, mixed lifting leg

A curved neck high in strength, mane pours down
Breath-taking eye of wildness and lightning
Sweeping tail, galloping swift legs
Pellias! Oh Pellias! A stallion free!

Author's age when written
11
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Comments

I love the last stanza! great descriptions. :)
luv, Hannah (and Maggie!)

*There are only two ways to live your life: one is as though nothing is a miracle, the other is as though everything is a miracle.
-- Albert Einstein*

I realy like it!

-Falling Leaves

"If life gives you lemons, throw them back!" -Joe Jonas (I think, or it might be another one of the AWESOME Jonas Brothers)

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