Heart, heart, heart
Beating, beating, as a clock
Tics nearby upon a shelf
Throb, throb breathing lungs
Moon traces down a path
Drip, drip, those saline eyes
Now, now, stop, stop…
I saw your eyes grow and pause
You passed from dark to light.
Comments
wonderful!
This was really cool!! Great beat!!!!
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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine
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I love this!!! The rhythm is just awesome!!! Wonderful!
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
love it!
This is great! I especially love the last two lines.
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"Now, now, stop, stop . . ." That's gonna be stuck in my head all day. lol. I love it. ::)
wow...
Really neat, Bernadette! :) Loved it.
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"Sweet is the love that never knew a wound, but deeper that which died and rose again." - Mother Mary Francis
I like the repetitions in
I like the repetitions in this. Sounds like you would read it slowly and steadily, almost chanting it. Thanks for sharing it.
That was really
That was really interesting-and enjoyable. I love the feel and rhythm of it.
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond