Moon So Fair

Submitted by Bernadette on Fri, 01/09/2009 - 21:18

That light, high in sky
The moon, it’s glowing
Brightness capturing my eyes

Its beaming softness
Turned its ways, to a land
Covered in the shadow of
Night

The moon of fair, sky of blue
Surround my sleeping world

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11
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I love it. :)
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Awesome, I really love it!

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I like the rhythm in this poem. Nice job!

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine