the daylight hours i must confess
are not always filled with happiness
open up a jar of dreams to chase away the stress
the nighttime serves to make you think
an atmosphere in which you sink
all thoughts and dreams are put in jars for thirsty minds to drink
creativity it seems is not to be found only in dreams
the facets of our daily lives are bursting at the seams
how this works inside a jar is a mysterious theme
as i look up into the sky it turns into a sea
an endless ocean in the night just waiting there for me
I'll pack a snack and a couple dreams in a jar for emergencies
as i wake up i notice that the sun is still in the sky
i must have had a million dreams. i'm glad i didn't die
time to close the jar again; it's time to say goodbye
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the nighttime serves to make you think
an atmosphere in which you sink
all thoughts and dreams are put in jars for thirsty minds to drink
That stanza stuck out. Great work!
thanks.
thank you. and it does too. if i go outside at night, i am almost overwhelmed with thought matter.
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well that's cool
i didn't mean to, but there are five lines and they alternate between day and night.
weird.
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