and all my dreams,
inside my head,
where they can't be seen.
All my emotions,
and all my tears,
I try to hold back,
even my fears.
I try to have peace,
in my heart,
but sometimes it's hard,
when it's torn apart.
When there are tears,
that run down my face,
I close my eyes,
and begin to pray.
Sometimes I try,
to put on a show,
and push everything out,
but no one knows.
When People accuse,
and nothing else,
I don't know what to do,
but what else will help?
When i'm crying inside,
and my hearts broken,
i'm about to explode,
but i suddenly begin choking.
Whenever i'm in,
one of these moods,
i close my eyes,
and ask God's help to remove,
all my emotions,
and ally fears,
all my sorrow,
and all my tears.
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this is really good. i feel that way too at times.
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Very good......
Wow, very sad but also very good!
-Falling Leaves
"I'm not that complicated...My complications come out in my songs. All you you have to do to be my friend is like me...And listen." -Taylor Swift (one of the best musical artists ever!)
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That was Brilliant
I loved It!!!!! Keep working that talented mind of yours!
the brit's brother: I'm very
the brit's brother: I'm very impressed. it reminds me of a poem i wrote at about the same age. It was called, THe BITTER BIT and talked about the inner beast that grows in all of us as we go through injustice and trials.
A long story short, I'm impressed with the simplicity yet intelligent way you communicate your thoughts.
Xan
Hey, Xan. This is such a sad poem, but was written very well. Keep writing...
"Inconceivable!!"-Vizzini