Note: I wasn't sure whether to try to post this or not due to possible misconceptions about the subject matter; however this is meant to be a poem based on a husband and wife's love for each other as they fall asleep together (something beautiful, God-pleasing, and without sin).
Darkness cannot encroach
on dreams so soft and sweet,
or wrap itself around two hearts
in synchronizing beat.
Fears banished in a soft caress,
words not need be spoken.
Hands intertwined together,
leaving peacefulness unbroken.
A ghosting of a loving breath
seeps into their skin.
The beauty of this moment lingers,
untouched by a sin.
Embracing souls float on free
in a gentle sigh.
Lulled to sleep by this song,
a lover’s lullaby.
Comments
aww! loved it!
This was really sweet! I loved it! I'm trying to think... what was my favorite line? I liked all of them! So sweet! Very good job! As always :D!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Thanks HomeschoolGirl and Kassady!
Thanks again guys for your lovely replies :) I really love this poem because of it's happiness and contentedness. It is a rather short poem for me, but it seemed to work for this one. I will try to get some more stuff up sometime (hopefully) soon. I also will try to read some more of your guys' work too now that I am not sick and out of college :) I really enjoy both of your works!
God Bless,
Wings of Eternity
"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12
Short but Sweet
Great job, Wings of Eternity! This was short, sweet, and to the point. It had a dreamy quality to it as well, so, I loved this one as well! :)