Note: Here is a bit of an older poem, but I thought I'd upload it for you all to enjoy :)
You cannot experience sun without rain,
joy without sorrow,
love without pain.
You cannot enjoy laughter without tears,
smiles without frowns,
trust without fears.
Life would be meaningless
if everything went your way,
if sunshine and happiness
filled each and every day.
Someday you’ll discover
the best blessings God can bring
are those when He guides you
from winter into spring.
It’s only when you’ve fallen
and experienced God’s pure love,
can you truly appreciate
every gift from above.
So do not run from trials
or fear when all seems lost;
remember Christ who suffered
and how he paid the cost.
He taught our greatest sacrifices
and our greatest pain,
often leads to our biggest blessings
and our biggest gain.
Comments
Thanks HomeschoolGirl!
*blushes* Thanks for such high praise yet again! It makes me excited to know that at least someone else is reading all of the stuff I write! I am glad that you enjoyed it! I have just submitted another poem for review so look for it soon! God Bless!
Wings of Eternity
"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12
Woh!
THIS WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!
PURE POETRY!!!!!!
I love these to lines most of all!:
You cannot experience sun without rain, joy without sorrow, love without pain. You cannot enjoy laughter without tears, smiles without frowns, trust without fears.
That was like.... *sigh*.... That just got me! Those lines are like the best of the best! The best writting there could be! My heart I think literaly skipped a beat! that was just incredible wording! I loved the feeling that you express through those words! I just got it right here *thumping chest in heart area, emotional tears welling!* LOL!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Thanks Kass!
Wow! Thanks for the high praise Kassady! I am thrilled that you loved it so much! That is why I write poetry, so that I can inspire and entertain others! I love the beginning stanzas too! Thank you soooo much for reading!
God Bless,
Wings of Eternity
"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12
Another great poem!
LOVE this one---loveitloveitloveit! :))
Someday you’ll discover
the best blessings God can bring
are those when He guides you
from winter into spring.
I totally agree--fantastic wording AND emotion! All your poems you can just imagine someone telling you. And more great mind-illustrations! LOL!
Well--gotta run! Good job (as usual!)
~HomeschoolGirl