Act 3
Chapter 20
The shadow loomed over the dirt floor of the hut. Andrija and Will sprang up. “Who’s there?” called Will. A huge fleshy thing filled the entire entry way. It seemed to expand, and five enormous fingers reached for Will, curling around his waist and dragging him through the dirt, out the door, and into the air.
Andrija shrieked with terror, for outside the hut towered a giant, at least 20 feet high. His large foolish eyes blinked at the boy he held in his right hand, while he scratched at his greasy locks with the other hand—seemingly contemplating what he would do with the child.
“Let him go, you great big bully!” Andrija pounded his feet with her fists. The giant goggled down at her and tilted his mangy head on one side.
Will was pale, and writhed in the giant’s hold like a slippery eel. He searched for Matrim’s dagger, and after a moment found it in his belt. With the courageous cry of: “Die, Villain!” the boy sent it into the giant’s thumb.
Immediately, he was hurtling through the air, landing at last in a heap of manure. Will stood up and dusted himself off, as Andrija ran to his side.
“Are you alright?”
“Y-yeah…” said Will shakily.
“What’d you do that for?” wailed the giant. Will turned. The giant sat on the ground, holding his thumb remorsefully, his great bottom lip protruding as fat tears rolled down his plump cheeks and splashed on the ground all around them.
“Shame, shame!” cried Andrija indignantly. “You were the one, sir, who began it! Shame-- a great big fellow like you bullying a little boy!”
“But what did he have to do that for?” sobbed the giant, pointing at his great thumb, where there stood a miniscule dot of red. “I wasn’t gonna hurt him none!”
“What’s up, Nagol? Have ya hurt yourself again?” Casia came out of the hut, holding the Ciris chick in her hands.
In one glance, she saw the prick on his thumb, the dagger, and the flushed face of Will.
“You were pickin’ folks up again, weren’t ya, Nagol?” the small girl asked irritably.
“Yes,” the giant admitted guiltily. “But I just wanted to see what ee looked like.” The tears began their rapid flow once more, and Casia gave an exasperated sigh.
“Ah, go on ta the river an’ wash that thumb o’ yours.”
The giant rose heavily to his feet, and ambled off, the ground shaking with every step until at last he was gone.
Casia sighed once more. “Poor fellow, he’s at least 65 in our years, but a child yet in the head! He wouldn’t hurt a fly, but he fergets his own strength, sometimes, and starts pickin’ people up. You see…” She leaned closer to Will and Andrija and whispered confidentially, “…he’s nearsighted.”
Andrija and Will nodded soberly. After a moment, Casia continued, “He has very bad eyesight, poor chap, and it drives him near crazy for not being able to see folks’ faces well. Golly, I do wish I could do somethin’ fer the fellow.” She stared down the desolate road towards the river. “You see, there was rumors a good many years ago, that Nagol was planning to lead a rebellion against the Dark Castle and, because of his great strength, cause some damage to the city. The Enchanter was troubled by these false reports, and by his dark arts, made Nagol’s eyes so weak that he could scarce see ten feet in front o’ him. O’ course, Nagol could never plot such a thing, being—bless his soul—quite slow in the mind.” Casia sighed and shook her head dismally. “I shore wish there was somethin’ we could do.”
Andrija nodded. “Well Casia, we had best be continuing on our journey. We are very concerned about our friend.”
“Yes. I suppose you must be. Poor girl, I do hope she’s safe. These are evil times, these are.” And shaking her head, Casia waved farewell, handed Will his satchel and the chick, and trotted off down the village street. “If there’s anythin’ else ya need, feel free to stop by! Goodbye! Goodbye!” The small girl disappeared over the hill.
“Where do we go now?” asked Will, slinging the satchel over his shoulder, and placing the chick on his shoulder, where it perched steadily.
Andrija swallowed, then smiled bravely. “Where else, Will? To the Enchanter’s Castle!”
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The carriage rattled along the dirt road, the horses’ hooves making a brisk rhythm that lolled Jane to sleep. In her hazy and delirious slumber, she dreamed of deep dark dungeons and diadems and Will and Andrija…and of Matrim.
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“Greetings, Uncle.” Matrim spoke calmly, evenly.
“You have much to explain, Nephew.” The Enchanter rose majestically from his throne and stalked slowly about Matrim like a predator about his prey. Chancellor Iawokim looked down his bulbous nose at the lad, his eyes narrowing.
“Very well,” Matrim shrugged indifferently. “Question me, I care not!”
The Enchanter chuckled darkly. “Let’s begin at the beginning-- a few weeks back, when I sent my entire garrison under the command of General Derk to find and destroy the Two Children. Yes, let’s begin a few days after the soldiers burned the house of those two fools, Ruther and Ford, I believe…by the way, Chancellor! What became of that fat fool, Ford?”
“He’s in the torture room at this very moment,” grinned the Chancellor maliciously. “He’s reduced to skin and bone, he is.”
Matrim tried in vain to suppress a shudder. The Enchanter shot a questioning glance at him. Matrim remained silent, but his face was flushed.
“During the burning of the mansion, it was reported that you were missing. You were reported missing for an approximate…” The Enchanter licked his lips and counted his fingers, “6 days.”
Matrim opened his mouth to speak, but the Enchanter shook his head and held up a pale hand to stop him.
“But you were well watched… Men, enter!”
Into the room stalked three ghostly figures-- the three horsemen—bearing the diadem on a scarlet cushion.
“They followed you, my boy, on your journey down the mountain, where you came first into the company of those accursed children. Then they alerted the army. General Derk ordered the troops back down the mountain, where they proceeded to dig you and the two children out of the cave. Unfortunately, they were wiped away by an avalanche, and you and the children escaped once more my clutches.”
The Enchanter smiled wryly, and tilted his head on one side as a devilish gleam danced in his deranged eyes. “But… not for long. I had the three horsemen follow you further. They captured the Diadem, and immediately brought it here. You, my boy, have arrived on a special day, you see-- my coronation! But, pray, explain why you kept company with those wretches, the two children, and why at last you have returned, bringing one of them as a prisoner.”
Matrim squared his shoulders and spoke with enthusiasm and assurance. “Sir, I have lived in the Palace all my life, living on the lap of luxury. From my early youth I have feasted on peacock, dined on golden platters, dressed in the richest silks, the costliest adornments. When, at age seventeen, I was appointed Sergeant in the army, I was confident in my ability to lead an army. The truth was, sir, through my upbringing, I was spoiled terribly, an arrogant, brash youth, inflated with vanity, my feet floating off the ground in ignorance-- until the day I was popped, landing in the land of reality. On my journey out of the city with my troops, I was horrified at the corruption of the land you rule. The poverty, the stench, the lack of knowledge, the terror, the condition of these undernourished souls! My head was reeling with indecision, bewilderment, and wonder, when I finally left the city. I had never seen such things before! Of course, I had noticed the corruption of your Imperial court, but being raised around it my whole life, I counted that normal.
Then occurred the final deflation! I was told it was my duty to capture two children. Perhaps they were traitors to Your Highness, perhaps they were devious plotting rebels, however, the fact being that they were but children, I could not bring myself to imprison them and bring them to you, where they would most undoubtedly suffer inhuman torture, and reach certain death! Beside, I could indeed sympathize with their cause after journeying through such horrible surroundings! While the ruler dines in luxury, his people scratch with fleas and live in extreme poverty. How could the two children be wrong in rebelling against so inhumane and so unjust dictatorship? This feeling so increased that I felt it totally against my conscience and I deserted the army.” Here Matrim held his head high, defiant.
The Chancellor held up his hand in protest, “Milord! Your Highness, I must plead--”
The Enchanter’s eyes flickered, and then blazed brighter than before. “Continue.”
Matrim took a deep breath. “I decided that I must know what these Children were truly like. What kind of rebellion did they lead? I had heard all sorts of dreadful things about them from my superior officers—for example: that they were young radicals, intent on finding the Diadem and giving it to an absolute dictator. But then I would hear conflicting reports that the Children were anarchists, who desired to destroy the Diadem! I was curious to know what they were like. When I met them, completely by chance, I found that I completely agreed with their cause. I brought one of the children here as ‘prisoner,’ for I knew that this would feed your curiosity, and that only by this would I be granted an audience with you.”
The boy who had met Jane in the Dungeon, Roland, watched this goings on from behind a marble statue. Roland was breathing heavily, his palms wet with perspiration. The meeting was not going as planned. “The fool! The honest fool! Can’t Matrim see he’s marching straight for death?” The boy gulped. “It’s just like him too, honest to the end! Ah! I should have known he couldn’t keep to the plan! What shall we do?”
Matrim continued on. “You see, sir, the Children had found the Diadem, and they were intent on finding a just man, that this treasure might be his, not to use in ruling the minds of the populace, but to assist him in reaching wise decisions benefiting his people. The Diadem’s power is not meant to be used in brainwashing the people, but in giving their ruler greater wisdom and justice. The Diadem is a great gift, but like any gift, it can be used wrongly. I have come here today, sir, risking my very life to bring you a warning.”
The Enchanter’s obsidian eyes were midnight blue slits in his pale face. The nobles and guards stood frozen about the hall in disbelief. A boy warning the Enchanter? How could it be?
Matrim stood courageous in the center of the room. A light seemed to glow from him as he threw back his head and met the gaze of the Enchanter. “Today is indeed a great day, sir! But not for the side of evil. Use the Diadem well, and you and your land will live long and prosper. Use the Diadem wrongly, and your people will rebel, your gates will be knocked down, your Palace destroyed, your evil ways wiped away forever. Another will wear the Diadem, and the people will flourish beneath him.”
Silence hung like the thickest fog in the hall. It seemed as if everyone around Matrim had been frozen to statues of marble. Every expression wore terror and surprise but Matrim’s. Young, strong, defiant, he contrasted so greatly with everyone in the room, that it seemed that he was from another world.
Then, the Enchanter moved. His eyes traveled around the room, then rested on Matrim. A flame danced in them. It grew. His eyes burned like the greatest bonfire, red, orange, and blue deep inside.
When he spoke, it caused the nobles to jump. It was a roar like an animal. It echoed off the stone walls of the hall.
“Guards, kill him!!”
Comments
I'm really enjoying this
I'm really enjoying this story, Teal. Nagol was so funny!
YEAH!!!!!!!! GO
YEAH!!!!!!!! GO MATRIM!!!!!!!!!!! I TOLD YOU HE WAS GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! *yells and jumps up and down* And I love Nagol. You need to help him out.
"It is man's inherent nature to scare himself silly for no good reason." - Calvin and Hobbes
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
Hahaha! The Society for
Hahaha! The Society for Matrim's Defense was too much for me!!! Oh! I'm glad you like Nagol, he will be reappearing in the story later.
~Teal :)
P.S. Try seeing what Nagol spells backwards... (A lot of the names that are in this story are the names of my friends and family spelled backwards or slightly adjusted, example: Casia- Kasia.) :D
Oh, that's cool, I never
Oh, that's cool, I never noticed that before. And I'm glad that Nagol will be back; he deserves to be.
"It is man's inherent nature to scare himself silly for no good reason." - Calvin and Hobbes
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
oh, i see...logan! isn't
oh, i see...logan! isn't that your brother's name, teal?
yep! hahahaha!! ~Teal :)
yep! hahahaha!!
~Teal :)
Oh, Teal, this is so good! I
Oh, Teal, this is so good!
I love Matrim's speech!
I love Nagol!
I love the whole story!
But I love this chapter the best!
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"Give the password," said the chief soldier.
"This is my password," said the King as he drew his sword. " 'The light is dawning; the lie broken'. Now guard thee, miscreant, for I am Tirian of Narnia!" --
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The best stories are those that are focused, unassuming, and self-confident enough to trust the reader to figure things out. --
http://lauraeandrews.blogspot.com/2014/05/dont-tell-me-hes-smart.html
yeah, recycling the names of
yeah, recycling the names of friends and family is a cool idea...i always have problems naming my characters.
Whom the god loves dies young-
Menander
By the way, Annabel, I like
By the way, Annabel, I like your quote!!! ;)
~ Teal :)
haha, thanks teal...good old
haha, thanks teal...good old menander the gloomy.
Whom the god loves dies young-
Menander
"guards kill him!"
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I WON'T LET YOU!!!!! Quick Society for Matrim's Defense, we must grab that vine, and then swing over there, then grab that poker, then swing down again toward Matrim so we can grab him up out of harm's way. I hope this vine will hold us all :O
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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville
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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville
No!!!!!
NO!!!! You CAN'T!!!! YOU CAN'T KILL HIM!!!! Quick, OFG! I don't think that the vine will hold us all! Let's go one at a time! And then we'll regroup and storm the castle!!!!
Oh, Teal, PLEASE POST SOON!!!!
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"Are you sure this water is sanitary? It looks questionable to me! But what about bacteria?"--Tantor the elephant from Tarzan.
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"Are you sure this water is sanitary? It looks questionable to me! But what about bacteria?"--Tantor the elephant from Tarzan.
I'm really enjoying this
I'm really enjoying this story, Teal. Nagol was so funny!