There was a man in El-Qadar,
A man with silver eyes.
He said to me, "Beware the dark,
"For it will whisper lies.
"And raze the shadows of the deep;
"Lest they haunt you forevermore,
"Mock and taunt you in your sleep."
I heard his words, heard and obeyed
The man with silver eyes.
And brought His light into the dark,
So none could hear its cries
And to the evil shades that lurk,
I brought Holy Fires, that burned
The deep hazes of their murk.
The man represents Jesus. Could you go through this poetic journey?
Comments
Liana, wow...this was very
Liana, wow...this was very good. I was struck by your word choice and your powerful storytelling. Thank you for sharing :)
Very good! I loved the flow
Very good! I loved the flow of it and it's message! God bless you!
C.S. Lewis ~ "He died not for men, but for each man. If each man had been the only man made, He would have done no less."
Impressive! I love the
Impressive! I love the metaphors. Very well-done.
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.