Chapter Two
1. And all of a sudden, a little man came in unto the room out of nowhere. And he said unto Leah,
2. "Why weepest thou, child?" And Leah answered and saud unto him, "my father did lie unto the king, and said unto him that I canst make straw into gold. But I cannot."
3. And the little man laughed and said unto her, "weep not child, for I can do that which thou said thou cannot. Just give unto me something of great value."
4. And Leah wondered at the words which he spake, and she gave unto him her necklace of gold.
5. And the necklace pleased him, and he bade her go to sleep whilst he spun.
6. And she fell into a peaceful sleep, and when she awoke, he was gone and the straw indeed spun into gold.
7. And she laughed merrily, and cried aloud with joy. And she thanked God, even the God of heaven.
8. And the king came in at morn, and beheld with awe the sight of gold straw.
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I like this chapter alot. I saw a few very good things in this chapter, as well.
A suggestion:
Instead of:
Weep not child, for I can do that which thou said thou cannot. Just give unto me something of great value."
You should put it this way: Weep not child, for I can do that which thou said thou cannot. Just give unto me something of great uniquity."
I don't know, unitquity means 'unique' but the spell check here says it is spelled wrong...but I looked it up in the dictionary and it's there. It just sounds more "Bible-ish" if you know what I mean...
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
thanks :D
Thank you, Megan! :) Good idea, too :D
~Sarah
Proverbs 3:5-6
Trust in the Lord with all thine heart, and lean not unto thine own understanding.
In all thy ways acknowledge him and he shall direct thy paths
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