New Snow

Submitted by Raine on Mon, 02/24/2014 - 20:40

there is
impressive silence
as the
teetering light
of morning
dances
under
graceful
white weather

Author's age when written

Genre

Poetry

Comments

Hannah D.

Mon, 02/24/2014 - 22:43

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This reminds me of a haiku .

This reminds me of a haiku . . . very pretty.

Tue, 02/25/2014 - 00:33

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This is lovely. A very

This is lovely. A very peaceful image :)

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Lucy Anne

Tue, 02/25/2014 - 01:01

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This is short, but it is definitely still poetry. I read it, and it instantly brought to my mind snow and how it looks outside. The only thing is, yesterday was such a nice spring day, and it's going to snow this week AGAIN. Can I admit that I never thought I would get tired of snow? It's probably because I got to shovel.

Anyways, this was beautiful. You need to post more!

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

Maddi

Sat, 03/01/2014 - 03:57

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Lovely imagery! I've only

Lovely imagery! I've only been to the snow once, and it was the coldest thing I'd experienced.....aaaaaand then we had to hop out because it blew up bad and we would have had to spend the night had we stayed any longer!

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh