Life

Submitted by Raine on Sat, 02/01/2014 - 13:57

this immovable soul
touched by the immensity
of the inevitable
disappearing of stars
clings-
in this shower of darkness
-to the roots of that tree
inextricably connected
to life

Author's age when written
24
Genre
Poetry

Comments

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Sun, 02/02/2014 - 04:03

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This is magnificent. You should seriously consider publishing a collection of your poetry, because you are incredible. :)

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Maddi

Tue, 02/04/2014 - 05:04

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You have an ability to portray and write about things so nicely. Good job :)

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh