Twenty feet down

Submitted by Paul on Fri, 01/17/2003 - 08:00

No one cares but me
No one cares but you
The world can’t be my home

No one knows your persona splendora but few
No one knows my good side but you
They only see my faults, too bad

I try to understand you
I know you understand me
I’m no puzzle anymore

Can’t be what I wish
Can’t you make me change
If only she knew my wish

Than I would begin to live
But I’ll swim through this pain
So did you even when it was 20ft down

My love is there to support
One time too few

Here is a poem I wrote on the spur of the moment. I think it could apply to any relationship. Even my relationship with God. It's not about a girlfriend, but I suppose it could apply to that sort of a relationship as well.

Author's age when written
15
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