Cold days, wind blowing, Suddenly, sun shines, breeze dies, And warmth has won. Tall branches, bare, dead, Reaching to the empty sky, then, A bloom of life, of green.
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Saw you had...
Saw you had posted another poem. This one's great, too! I love your writing style. I love this line:
A bloom of life, of green.
Welcome to AP!! :)
Thank you very much. I am
Thank you very much. I am glad to be on apricot pie, and i'm happy you like my writing.
Nice!
I really like this poem because I myself am looking forward to spring. I usually take a walk two or three times a week along a country trail, and right now the trees are all "bare and dead." I'm looking forward to some green.
Anyway, welcome to Apricotpie!
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