Warmer Weather

Submitted by Madeline on Thu, 03/31/2016 - 14:47

you're an unbelievable breath of beauty
hair and arms and legs
the way you lean on
windowsills and
smile against pain
it seems like
you're constantly forging
onward soldier
while I stand by
and wait
for the storm to pass
the clouds to clear but
I've realized that
they'll stay
no matter how I close my eyes
and wish for
warmer weather
while you dance on ahead
kicking puddles astray
hands out
and no umbrella
you just let it
wash all over you
but
I like staying dry
so I linger beneath the
overhang
and watch the
water rise

Author's age when written
18
Genre
Notes

Fiction, fiction, fiction always! This is just a little poem-cercise. Messing around with metaphor, allitteration, all that good stuff!

Comments

This is lovely! I obviously have some catching up to do as far as reading goes. Haha. I'll try to get around to reading Cards soon!

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I absolutely love this one!!! One of my favorites probably! I apologize for not keeping up for so long! Now it's like binge watching but binge reading your amazing poetry! I love it!

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Ah, just when we are turning to colder weather! Finally!
Lovely collection of words there, like usual :)

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh