you're an unbelievable breath of beauty
hair and arms and legs
the way you lean on
windowsills and
smile against pain
it seems like
you're constantly forging
onward soldier
while I stand by
and wait
for the storm to pass
the clouds to clear but
I've realized that
they'll stay
no matter how I close my eyes
and wish for
warmer weather
while you dance on ahead
kicking puddles astray
hands out
and no umbrella
you just let it
wash all over you
but
I like staying dry
so I linger beneath the
overhang
and watch the
water rise
Fiction, fiction, fiction always! This is just a little poem-cercise. Messing around with metaphor, allitteration, all that good stuff!
Comments
Thank you much! :) And no, I
Thank you much! :) And no, I haven't--haha. Thanks for asking! I just haven't been in the right mood to continue writing it at the moment, but I'll get there. Encouragement helps!
Good! I'm so glad. I'll try
Good! I'm so glad. I'll try to keep the encouragement coming. :P
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
This is lovely! I obviously
This is lovely! I obviously have some catching up to do as far as reading goes. Haha. I'll try to get around to reading Cards soon!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
I absolutely love this one!!!
I absolutely love this one!!! One of my favorites probably! I apologize for not keeping up for so long! Now it's like binge watching but binge reading your amazing poetry! I love it!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
:)
Ah, just when we are turning to colder weather! Finally!
Lovely collection of words there, like usual :)
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
Lovely like it always is!
Lovely like it always is! Loved it.
You haven't given up on "Cards" have you?! :)
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.