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Submitted by E on Tue, 01/13/2015 - 14:38

But you, you
You are the hole in my chest
The missing piece to my puzzle
The coffee in my mug
The rhythm in my step
The crack in my world.

Author's age when written
18
Genre
Notes

Short. Hope y'all like it!

Comments

I love it! So many pictures in my mind that you painted..."the crack in my world".
Although short, this is wonderful.

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Ditto to Maddi! This is so deeply beautiful! I love how meaningful and just Full of raw emotion you can make a short poem like this!! Love it!

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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