See Life

Submitted by Arya Animarus on Sun, 04/10/2011 - 08:22

Happiness, sadness,

Joy and sorrow,

This is the world in which we live.

Dreams, hopes,

Loves, hates,

This is the world we live in.

 

See...

What we were meant to be.

Look...

At what we have seen.

Life...

 

Colors, scents,

On the breeze,

Wind is blowing

Through the trees.

This is what I was born to know,

And, oh how I love it so.

 

See...

What we were meant to be.

Look...

At what we have seen.

Life...

 

Birds are soaring,

My heart flies with them.

Welcome to life.

My mind is far across the world,

This is life.

 

See...

What we were meant to be.

Look...

At what we have seen.

Life...

Author's age when written
13
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Comments

This is a wonderful piece of poetry! I actually like that the form is not uniform. I think that this adds to the message of the poem. The imagery is beautiful. I have only read two of your works, but for some reason you always seem to make me feel like I am floating on clouds and you are gently tugging me along through your words. It is very peaceful and wonderful! My favorite stanza has to be:

Colors, scents,

On the breeze,

Wind is blowing

Through the trees.

This is what I was born to know,

And, oh how I love it so.

Absolutely gorgeous! Keep up the great work!

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