If the world was seen through an emerald eye
Stained-glassed windows all aspire
If heart was wood of cord and pine
Billowing willows on the moor
If words would fail bitter darts
The gulls long wailing in the morn
If the world was seen through an emerald eye
Glass-stained doors all awry
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cool
Great word choice throughout this poem! My favorite part was the second stanza... All of this sounds so cool, the sort of thing that just has to be read aloud.
Lyrical, Bernadette.
Lyrical, Bernadette.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
whew....
That was a really awesome poem, Bernadette! I had to read through it twice..... I loved the fact that you used the word 'emerald' it sounded cool...
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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine