Still Coming

Submitted by Bernadette on Sun, 08/30/2009 - 17:56

With my arm around the candle

And my boots thumping on the ground

Though the sky is still gray

I'm still coming

Out in the dim lit earth

To see Your glory dawn.  

(written when it was 6:41, in the morning, waking from a dream)

Author's age when written
11
Genre
Poetry
Tags
morning
gray
dawn

Comments

Elizabeth

Thu, 09/10/2009 - 11:10

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This is one of your best!!!! I loved this poem!!!!!

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

Clare Marie

Fri, 09/11/2009 - 02:02

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Bernadette, this is so amazing!!  I love it!!

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Hannah W.

Fri, 09/11/2009 - 03:32

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I love this!! The title and everything, just absolutely smashing, dear!!!
:)
-Hannah (and Maggie)