We took a peaceful ride,
Through the country-side.
Where no busy road,
Nor a highway is in sight.
So many cattle grazing,
Along the fence lines.
I see the goats and sheep,
Eating thorns and vines that creep.
And chickens running,
Around the yard so freely.
But a beauty in the pasture ahead,
Catches my eye. What can it be?
A horse of course.
It's mane and tail blowing softly.
And a perfect white star,
On it's sun-soaked, bay head.
P.S. I need ideas for a title. Post some ideas
for me please. Thanks!
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good job Lexus. I was just
good job Lexus. I was just reading random things and found this. Very much like! :) as for a title... i really dont know. 'Horse' is just fine as it is.
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Good job. I'd simply go with
Good job. I'd simply go with the original title to give the full effect. It's a mystery, it's a dream, it's a vision---it's a horse.
Nice job with this. I'm
Nice job with this. I'm pretty bad with titles, so I won't be of any assistance.
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