That's Who I Am

Submitted by Anonymous on Tue, 12/02/2008 - 22:39

You tell me to be quiet,
But, my personality is loud,
That’s just who I am,
You would know that if you were really my best friend,
I can’t help it,
And I thought you of all people would understand.

While you ditched me for your other friends,
They only give you fake grins,
You leave me in the dark,
Feeling like your voodoo doll that’s vandalized with needles and pins,
I’m your friend unlike them,
They only pretend.
I don’t know when you’ll realize what you lost,
One day you’ll pay the cost,
You’ll see what a good friend you tossed,
Because I’m not one to be bossed,
I won’t be silenced,
Or hopefully not forgotten.

I’m speechless,
On more thing I can’t take back,
Never thought you’d treat me like that,
Never thought you’d walk all over me like welcome mat,
I’m not forgiving enough to give you a second chance,
I guess I don’t fit in,
I know I’ll just have to forget it.

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Good job! It's kinda sad, but very good! Great wording.

"Every recording studio needs a rubber chicken." -Joe Jonas

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"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I love it. It is so cool. There are, sadly, so many girls who let their friend trample over them and run their lives.
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I honestly had no clue that my friend would ever do that to me! But I after I wrote it I have pretty much forgiven her...

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