Love is a fire,
that burns forever,
and now it marks,
how long we'll be together.
Love is a tower,
but it isnt frail,
it withstands,
the fastest gale.
It brought us together,
opend the door,
and left us wanting,
so much more.
but love isnt just roses,
it could be a mine,
that blows up mid-step,
leaving you scars to hide.
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thanx
-NICKO-thank u
i am new to the world of poetry, so little comments like that realy lift my spirits
Long Live The lords and masters of the Sith !
Wow! That was beautiful!
Wow! That was beautiful! Really!
Oh wow. this is amazing!
Oh wow. this is amazing! you're a really good poet! keep up the good work!!!!!!!
lol
lol why thanks :) i appriciate it
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Beautifuly put!
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The Truth will set you free.