LOVE

Submitted by Nick on Fri, 11/23/2007 - 13:32

Love is a fire,
that burns forever,
and now it marks,
how long we'll be together.

Love is a tower,
but it isnt frail,
it withstands,
the fastest gale.

It brought us together,
opend the door,
and left us wanting,
so much more.

but love isnt just roses,
it could be a mine,
that blows up mid-step,
leaving you scars to hide.

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Beautifuly put!

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The Truth will set you free.

-NICKO-thank u
i am new to the world of poetry, so little comments like that realy lift my spirits

Long Live The lords and masters of the Sith !

thats nice.

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The Truth will set you free.

That was very pretty! But you need to work on your spelling. Don't feel critisized. I'm just really onto spelling problems.

BTW, change your profile pic.

Oh for the times when I felt invincible.