The ground is coverd with a white diamond dust,
your heart will be filled with a loving trust,
scoop some in your hand and you'll be taken to another land,
a real life land it will seem,
but that is just a diamond dust dream.
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haha thanks i made iit up when..
haha thanks again sarah! I made it up when I was doing school. I was thinking of snow and how it looked like little diamonds or Dimond Dust :)
A beautiful piece
Pretty imagery and phrases
Formerly Kestrel
"diamond dust dream" Love it.
"diamond dust dream"
Love it. :D
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
Sun, 04/25/2010 - 17:11
In reply to "diamond dust dream" Love it. by Clare Marie
thanks clare i..
thanks clare i really love your stuff so it makes me really happy that you like my poems. and yes i love the diamond dust dream line too : )
I wish reality allowed for
I wish reality allowed for diamond dust. ;)
WHOA. This is actually really
WHOA. This is actually really good. :) I wasn't sure how it was going to end, (I was like, "how is she going to finish it while still rhyming?") but you made it work really well. Nice job, Michelle. :)