The wind did howl and cry
But a creature made of sand and stone stood
And Called with a human voice, "come back, come back"
not a man and yet with a mans form
the desert spirt set off to find....HER
for he was...in love and had felt the touch of destiny
The people he passed thought him a desert bandit
so they grew quiet when he passed and would not tell where she had gone
So threw the dunes he swept like a banshee
over hills and dales to find
her
Comments
Well...
I wouldn't go so far as to say 'mushy', though it definitely lacks some of the intensity of the previous parts. The story is shaping up to be very interesting, indeed! Post more soon, please?
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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!
What do ya think?
At the moment I think its starting to go to mushy. What about you?