muddy boots, thoughts of rain,
air, air,
chilly morning in haze
red barn door contrasting
murmur of anxious nickers asking
you caress,
brown eyes and hooves
saddle and reins tighten,
awaiting, awaiting,
the racing of two
girth groans the saddle creaks
you feel,
the wish with happiness
the urge of the wind says
come, come,
it beckons and lifts you up
invisible hands that reach beneath
your arms and wrap around you
you go,
rising, swift and true
flowing mane
beauty, beauty,
exudes from Makers hands
you give your yes to the wanting rush
and you fly with the creatures demands
you smile,
exhilaration, alive and renewed
the force of the wind says
slow, slow,
it changes it's tone and
as your arms are stiff and unbending
it beats your chest and cries in your ear
you quiet,
unhurried, slow, without fear
ruddy cheeks
tinge, tinge,
of chill and bitterness
the rocking gait with harsh wind now brings tears
the faces that hold reserve, one with creation and earth
you urge,
calm persistence and force
leaves chase
rhythm, rhythm,
they chase the active tail
with black hooves pressing pounding the dirt
in constant eagerness. The two of you, consistent
you pierce,
the air in quickening motion, eager into fierce
then it's paused
halting, halting
you reach the top beyond the ending point
it used to be the bane that you hadn't thrashed
but you have moved on, the nerves have passed
you stop,
your rides never mundane
a shiver glances from mount to rider
hushed, hushed,
you relax in stillness once on the heights
freedom forms your lips
you sigh,
more like a gasp, at the success
your breath with the sun
peace, peace,
it breaks the awaited, hear it call your name
until you answered it was silent but then it changed
when it called you, fearless you came.
Comments
BEAUTIFUL.... this perfectly
BEAUTIFUL.... this perfectly captures the experience of a glorious ride; I love the last stanza, and "you give your yes to the wanting rush." Well done!
BEAUTIFUL!!!
This was stunning! I really, really, loved it!!! It was just beautiful!!!
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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine
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wonderful!
this is beatiful!
wonderful...............
so beatiful, I love this.
i loved it! perfect ending.
i loved it! perfect ending. the rhythm is great, too.... overall just really well done.