Over a thousand years ago
In a decayed, rusty shop
A man hunched over a peice of glass
He was careful not to drop
This glass, it had significance
A purprose for it's making
So the experienced hands continued on
The glass was for the taking
People stared at it's brilliance
Sitting upon a dusty shelf
Almost a hypnotizing magic glow
Stood out from everything else
Years passsed, things happened
The man had passed away
The shop was torn down
Things had truly changed
The glass was taken home
By a scrawnly little man
With dreams of wife and family
And a nice plot of good land
He set the jar in the corner
And misfortune soon was his
A terrible storm destroyed his crop
No woman cared for him
Sadly he moved up and away
Selling the jar as he went
The buyer gave him three coins
And away the jar was sent
A regal woman with riches
Opened the sturdy box
She tried to lift the lid
But it stayed secure to the top
Her husband hit it with a hammer
It refused to even crack
He truly did try everthing
And then he was attacked
An invisiable force spun him crazy
Slammed him into trees
His wife found him with a cry
The jar was very pleased
You see, reader, it fed off emotions
This mysterious jar did
It would do whatever it took
To forever live
He hurt people who were greedy
Who didn't want permission
He commited many crimes
Without anyone's suspicion
The one day a young girl knew
As she was lying in her bed
Just who had pushed her from behind
She arose seeing red
Carefully she made her way
Through the deep and dark
She grabbed the awful jar
A blaze started in the hearth
Carefully she held it to her face
And whispered sacred words
Then she tossed it in
And it melted with a blur
Suddenly a hundred faces appeared
Sorrowed with lost plans
And the last face came
Of the wicked, evil man...
Comments
Fantastic!
HomeschoolGirl this was absolutely fantastic! I loved the whole idea and you brought it about beautifully in this poem! I actually had to read to the end to find out what was going on! I just LOVE this poem! Please write more poetry! You are so great at it!
Only thing I noticed were a few spelling errors: Peice should be piece
purprose should be purpose
invisiable should be invisible
Other than those very minor errors this was superb!
God Bless,
Wings of Eternity
"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12
Thanks Guys!!! :))
Thanks Kass & Wings of Eternity! LOL! I tend to make spelling mistakes when I type fast. Thanks for letting me know. I never proofread, though I should! I'll make those corections! ;D
OMG!!!!!!!
THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!
Great job! this was great.... Wow! I'm speechless, that's how good it is!
FANTASTIC!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!