Dreams

Submitted by Madeline on Fri, 06/11/2010 - 02:25

Dreams are filled

With flying wing

Colors dance

With thee I sing

Flowers stars

And hopeful ways

Slipping through

Hopeful days

And if you truly

Can believe

I will sing to you

My dream

Author's age when written

12

Genre

Comments

Fri, 07/09/2010 - 15:03

Slipping through hopeful

Slipping through hopeful days... I like that line a lot. It has a nice uniformity. Good job :)

Sat, 07/10/2010 - 14:29

Thank You!

Thank you so much for your comment! Your poems are absolutely amazing and I love all of them!

Tue, 07/13/2010 - 16:44

I loved that!

that was really nice Homee!

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Wed, 01/05/2011 - 19:37

Fantastic poem!

I like this a lot! Dreams are very much like that. Or at least good dreams, I should say :)

Fri, 01/07/2011 - 20:08

:))

Thanks Alexandra! :))

Yes, hopefully good dreams!!!

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