He sat there
Lost
Lightning flashed
And rain poured down
His guitar strings went out of tune
The notebook’s pages were soaked
His red hoodie protected his dark locks and eyes
And he emptied his soul to the thunder
Yep. Pretty much.
Comments
Thankyou! Your comment was
Thankyou! Your comment was lovely. Thanks.
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
I like this a lot. That last
I like this a lot. That last line was super cool!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Thankyou!
Thanks for the comment! Its always nice to get one from you and know that you read my stuff.
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
I had to read this three
I had to read this three times. It was really really good!! There's this certain feeling after I read it that I can't explain. Maddi, you're getting so good with poetry!
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
Wow!
Wow Maddi! This is really great, I loves the imagery of this, and the way you just painted a perfect portrait of a story in just a few lines! Amazing!!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!