Nuance of Water

Submitted by Madalyn Clare on Sat, 02/02/2019 - 21:15

Tears are desperate
Creatures.

There is not one
Emotion that drags
Them to my cheeks,
To be collected back
Into the ground.

Water is changing;
Water gives life,
It takes it away.
Water is cold;
Water is destruction.

And yet we thirst
For it; eight hours is
All we can wait for
A drop of a natural
Catastrophe.

The same
Capricious heritage
Carries itself down
My cheeks in a
Wave of emotion.

Water is a desperate
Thing in itself;
It takes an act of
Good will, a loving
Gesture, a death,
And even a tiny
Bee sting for it
To leave us in
A parade of tears.
A droplet is eager
To leave us, it lies
In wait of pain,
Of joy, of any human
Reaction to relieve us
Of the weight of water
And to wildly run away
Laughing, playing,
Praying to fall on
Concrete or soil
And return to whence
We received it.

Author's age when written
16
Genre
Notes

I had been seeing the poems about tears and I thought I'd like to take a different spin on it, and talk about the tears themselves.

Comments

Ok, so I LIVE with you and I am constantly blown away by the talent that I'm seeing posted up here, girl!!!! I love this image of tears as things that are practically BEGGING to escape and the fact that it really does not take much for them to come...I particularly love the word choice 'a parade of tears'...LOVE IT!

One little note...not sure if this was intended but you wrote:
'To leave us, it lies
In weight of pain,'
and I was not sure if you meant to write "weight" or "wait"...

Love it love it love it

When I worship, I would rather my heart be without words than my words be without heart.

THIS IS THE BEST
I love it so much!! This might be one of my favorite poems now.

“planting seeds inevitably changes my feelings about rain.” —luci shaw.
psalm 84:10 esv.

THIS IS THE BEST
I love it so much!! This might be one of my favorite poems now.

“planting seeds inevitably changes my feelings about rain.” —luci shaw.
psalm 84:10 esv.