Summer-Moon

Submitted by LoriAnn on Tue, 12/15/2009 - 22:43

(Note--this has nothing to do with my sister's story "The Shadowed Moon". Sorry that the titles are so similer. I tried to think of something else, but...*shrugs* Anyway...)

 

The yard is eerie-quiet The sky is velvet-deep The wood is night-alively My eyes are not-asleep   What wondrous time is this? When all about my room The shadows float so softly In a sea of moon-tossed gloom   Pearly-blue and satin-black Mingle on my floor Across the wall and pillow flicker The flames of nightsong’s shore   Patchy light, like shards of glass Dances with the breeze Reflecting in my dream-dazed eyes Once passing through the trees   Shadows cast by moonlight Are tricksy, changeling things Their best intentions may be fraught With impish counter-rings   But as I lie in sleepless daze While shadows dance around I cannot help but wish To be so wonder-found   The yard is eerie-quiet The stars are shedding-tear The wood is night-alively And Summer-moon is here
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The shadows float so softly
In a sea of moon-tossed gloom

Beautiful, beautiful. And even more so for being written in the middle of winter.  I could clearly see everything.

Formerly Kestrel

Okay, so I'm finally caught up on NaNo and really REALLY needed a break, so I pulled up AP (hallelujah it's still here for me to read!!!!) and am reading back over old stuff I apparently missed.  Anyway, I just now read this poem and absolutely love it!  Your rhythm, your rhyme scheme, the imagery, the whole atmosphere of the poem are just amazing! This is now officially one of my favorite poems ever!

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!