Sudden Brother

Submitted by LoriAnn on Tue, 01/20/2009 - 22:34

It sometimes happens
That when I’m reading
Or writing
Or singing to myself
I forget to notice
The stealthy tread
Of steps
Outside my door
And just when I’ve gotten
To the best part
Of the book
Or even the song
HE bursts in like a firecracker
Makes me jump
Bangs the door open
And I usually get a little mad
HE just stands there and grins
In an infuriating way
That I kinda like
(Though only after HE’s gone)
Sudden Brother

Author's age when written
12
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This is great! "He just stands there and grins/In an infuriating way..." Sounds just like my little brother!! :0)
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The leprechauns made me do it!!

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And now our hearts will beat in time/You say I am yours and you are mine...
Michelle Tumes, "There Goes My Love"

It's like you know my brother in person...
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He who is near to his Captain is sure to be a target for the archers.
-Amy Carmichael

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Sounds like my older brother
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Are Washintonians the only people who pronounce the word "our" as "are"?

Birdie (nickname for my brother) used to and still does try to scare me... note the "try", though, because he's only succeeded once. ;)
I do know people who are quite good at it, though.

I can't relate because I only have two brothers and both of them are older than me. But as far as the actual scaring goes...I'm EASILY scared. A little while ago, my friend's younger brother (age four or five) was in my living room. I thought it was somebody else and I turned into the hall to see who it was. I saw nothing at my eye level but then I looked down and saw this little child and I screamed so loudly. Needless to say, it was somewhat amusing to the people watching. I may not have a little brother who scares me, but I have about everyone else in the world who does.

“For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.” Audrey Hepburn

Are you sure you've never met my little brother, LoriAnn? This sounds just like him.

Brit, your comment made me laugh! I seem to have a vauge recollection of an incident similar to what you were describing:):);)
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"Pretty soon people are going to come to look at it. And some of those people will be... realtors!"--Klaus Baudelaire

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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

I'm pretty sure most brothers are like that. And now I have two - and one is only four. yeah; double the fun!
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"I am a dreamer, take me higher, open the sky up, start a fire...I beleive, even if it's just a dream." -Bethany Dillon

sounds like my little brothers. :P
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"You're pirates! Hang the code, and hang the rules! They're more like guidelines anyway"
-Elizabeth Swan//Pirates of the Caribbean//Curse of the Black Pearl

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

A seven-yr-old and a 12-year old

The seven yr old isn't as bad if I can get him alone.

Formerly Kestrel

Mine are fourteen and four. The four-year-old's not bad if you can get him to sit still. LOL

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"I am a dreamer, take me higher, open the sky up, start a fire...I beleive, even if it's just a dream." -Bethany Dillon