Here's a little poem I wrote that I hope ya'll enjoy! Also, for those of you who didn't know, I wrote a second part to Amira.
JOYFUL MORNING
How long the night has been, Mother,
When will it be day?
Sorrow fills my mind;
Is the darkness here to stay?
Nay, my child, the night must end,
The sun shall rise once more;
There shall be a joyful morning
Of this I am sure.
Mother, the moon is clouded,
The stars I cannot see;
How can you trust the sunrise
When the shadows do not flee?
My child, the sun has come
Ev'ry morning, ev'ry day;
Though now the night seems long and drear,
It is not here to stay.
Mother, mother, I can see it:
The sun leaps into the sky;
The shadows are fleeting,
They scatter and die!
You see, my child, I told you
The dawn would come at last;
A joyful morning will always rise,
When the sorrowful night is past.
Comments
I love this.. :)
I love this.. :)
:)
I love this Laura!
Rebecca
Good job!
You did a good job, Laura, I can't think of rhymes that good. I'm pretty bad at poems :D
Hey
Hey, hows it going? Just thought I should introduce you to myself. Cheers. Jarowth N.
Hey
Hey, hows it going? Just thought I should introduce you to myself. Cheers. Jarowth N.
This was lovely : )
It sounded a little like something a hobbit mother might sing to her child. Very delightful. It made me smile.
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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!