Whispers

Submitted by Keri on Sun, 12/07/2008 - 06:07

Something whispered quietly
Quietly
Quietly
Something whispered quietly if only I could hear it

Someone's heart was broken today
Broken today
Broken today
Someone's heart was broken today if only I had noticed

Somehow lives were changed yesterday
Yesterday
Yesterday
Somehow lives were changed yesterday if only I paid attention

Something whispered in my ear
In my ear
In my ear
Something whispered in my ear now things are going to happen

Author's age when written
15
Genre

Comments

I'm sad to say that I don't quite understand. It was writen really well though.

For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.- Audrey Hepburn

I think it's about gossip, but I'm not sure either! Beautifully written!

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The electric device I can’t live without... is a toaster!
-Joe Jonas

That's ok I'm not sure what it's about either and I wrote it! It can be about whatever you want!
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isn't it about paying attention to others? or there feelings?
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The unperfect person, in the unperfect world, surrounded by unperfect people, with an absolutely perfect God!

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The Truth will set you free.

I said it can be about whatever you want. That means it can be about bullfrogs and butterflies for all I care
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If you are offended by the truth-- that's how you know you don't have it! -Brad Stein

hahahah bullfrongs. or how about a worted frog was that wut katie had to choose?
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The unperfect person, in the unperfect world, surrounded by unperfect people, with an absolutely perfect God!

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The Truth will set you free.

Our friend Katie hates anything not cute and furry. And she is terrified of spiders and in a game we wre playing at Christmas party, she had to choose whether she would rather cuddle up with a snake, a tarantula, or a warty toad and she picked the toad.
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If you are offended by the truth-- that's how you know you don't have it! -Brad Stein