I liked a lot of the wording you chose to use in this poem. They were expressive and made sense as I read.

I really adore all the instances of rhyme in this, and I find it poignant in the way that it's structured and paced. Each line feels like a piece of a bigger whole, and then it snaps together at the end of every stanza. It's very clean that way, and very sweet.

I love this:

and you can't get enough.
The tongue

Just that little taste of rhyme--the enough and the tongue is so great, it just jolts you into this trance when you're reading it.

I think at the same time, too, you could read this several times before you notice all the little meanings in it. At the same time it's straightforward, the poem has a lot of instances where it would take a pause to really let it all catch up, to sink in.

I love how you focused just on the verbal aspect of being infatuated with someone...how you cling to what they say. You did that so well. This is one of my all-time favorites of yours!!!

also, fave part:

Every smile infused syllable,
Slides like slow hands,
Wrapped round my chest,
Every breath,
I want them on me.

Spell-binding! I read it more than once and felt its power :)

I really liked this! The imagery in the first few lines are so interesting and unique:
"You say my name,
Like you're casting a spell,
Like every letter tastes good
and you can't get enough."
In love!

Thank you all so very much :D I was really proud of this piece and your encouragement and lovely comments just make me more proud and excited that I was successful!