Closer: Canto VI: Faery Land

Submitted by Julie on Wed, 02/09/2011 - 00:36

 

Canto VI: Faery Land   One door and only one yet its sides are two On which side are you?   “Well, here comes the weekend,” I coughed “Shame I’m not feeling well.” I shuffle to my room unlock door, drop my backpack stop in the bathroom but when I open the stall door I see…   I see…   Towering evergreens against a watercolor sky ground speckled with forest wildflowers trampled grass paths   I never consider the possibility I’m dreaming For if I was I wouldn’t blink at anything   “Amazing. amazing!” I skip down the path “I’m Lucy of Narnia, I’ve found a new world, Yipee!”   I wander through the wood Till the sky turns sapphire Only then do I realize I don’t know my way back I’m alone in a wood (possibly full of monsters) with… I turn out my pockets: a room key a Tootsie Roll wrapper a used Kleenex and a cell phone I flip it open No bars.   Not surprising I don’t even get reception in my dorm   But just as I begin to worry, I spy a bobbing light along the path ahead. I fight my first instinct to run towards it instead, I slink from tree to tree till I can glimpse a swinging lantern in an old lady’s hand   “Who’s there?” she calls “Someone’s there”   If she’s bad Running won’t save me If she’s good why should I flee?   And the only way to solve a mystery is by fighting it   So I step out “Hello” (At least she speaks English or maybe I speak her tongue)   “Are you lost?” She asks “Well, you’ll freeze if you stay out all night Come with me I always have room  for guests What’s your name?”   Names have power and I won’t give her that power yet “Call me Shyllen,”   “You can carry the lantern” she offers   I could run away with it but where would I go? “You keep it I don’t know where we’re going.” I follow her through dancing fireflies to a tiny cottage   Someone stands at the door silhouetted by dancing hearth fire awaiting orders   The woman holds up her lantern revealing a face that makes me gasp    
Author's age when written
18
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Comments

Ah, I love this! 

And I'm finally caught up, and shan't fall behind again!

 This is beautiful. I love the way you write . .but the ending has made me insanely curious so you had better post more! :)

"I never consider
the possibility
I’m dreaming
For if I was
I wouldn’t blink
at anything"

Exactly!

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief