Aftermath

Submitted by Julie on Mon, 11/25/2013 - 14:13

Hornets buzz in my blacked-out brain:
panicked, shrill, harpy-sweet.
Rough hands clamp my shoulders, press into stillness,
the motionless frenzy of deer before dogs
devour their entrails.

Two syllables as a question: my name
in a strange infliction. I pull away.
To him, it’s only another incident
to file downtown. Forms, testimonies
-- They’re my friends,
not a two-inch newspaper column,
an item next to idle gossip and
foreign wars.

“He’s in shock—a blanket—“
Not that kind of cold. No.
Not at all. The buzzing, a high piccolo
accompanied by soprano syllables.
I can’t follow them now; let me stay
in case…just in case.

Author's age when written
20
Genre
Notes

I wrote this poem for my capstone class last spring

Comments

This is great. The imagery and the feel behind it was so vivid. Awesome job.

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Can't say much without repeating Erin! I loved the first stanza; SO good with the imagery.

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh