My death
The waves pass my green eyes
Green reflects off the blue that’s swishing right in front of me
Nothingness fills my ears
Thoughts fill my mind
Death fills my body
Life no where around
Little kid's voices fill my thoughts
A picture of when I was 4 fills my head
Nothing fills my heart
My soul travels to another heart, then another
My 14 year old body, no longer alive
Comments
This is tragic, but I like
This is tragic, but I like it. You enjoy writing sad things don't you? I read your other poems, hence the "writing sad things". I quite like them.
"Here are the beauties which pierce like swords or burn like cold iron." C.S.Lewis
"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died. Rather we should thank God such men lived."
General George S. Patton
Whoa...That was just a
Whoa...That was just a little bit creepy. But you're a pretty good writer. I can't believe I liked that! ;-)
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Thu, 04/23/2009 - 16:46
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Oh and that last post was by
Oh and that last post was by Nate-Dude. I didn't log in. sorry.
Beautifully depressing. I
Beautifully depressing. I love it; it's so surreal.
"When reality sucks, try insanity." - Unknown
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
Okay. That was shocking. Um,
Okay. That was shocking. Um, yeah....But you know, with all it's disturbing bleakness, I like it.
"It's not who you are underneath, but what you do that defines you." from Batman Begins