Refuge (another Song)

Submitted by j. Glen pollard on Tue, 01/27/2015 - 18:05

Refuge

(Verse 1)

My Refuge, He won’t move or sway
He’ll stay with you no, won’t fade
He’s a steadfast structure
Immoveable in all weather
Strong like a rock, great as a tree
A strong hold for a pilgrim like me
Just remember this word is true
God’s not gonna let go of you

(Chorus)
When the rain starts to pound against your life
Don’t bow down to doubt or strife
Whenever you think you’re gonna lose
Just remember He’s your refuge

(Verse 2)
Even when the waves come
When they knocked you to your feet
Treasure His never failing love
So when the Enemy says you're in defeat
Remember that your God is enough

When the rain starts to pound against your life
Don’t bow down to doubt or strife
Whenever you think you’re gonna lose
Just remember He’s your refuge

(Bridge)
My Refuge won’t sway or fade
He’ll stay, He won’t ever sway (4xs)

When the rain starts to pound against your life
Don’t bow down to doubt or strife
Whenever you think you’re gonna lose
Just remember He’s your refuge, Ooh, yeah. Refuge.

Author's age when written
14
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Comments

Oh this is so good!!! I love it. Very good words and thought. Also very good rythm. I have no critiques. :)
If you ever record it I would like to have a copy of it. :)

I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.

When I read it, I could imagine Isaiah singing it with guitar. Has he already? Maybe you know how to play guitar now. I want to hear the melody sometime...you should present it at the graduation. It has nice lyrics - I'm impressed! The only thing I would question is the word of "strife". How would you turn to "strife"? I understand "doubt", though. Maybe I have the wrong definition of "strife".

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thanks for the feedback. And yeah, LucyAnne, I do play guitar and will put the chords up for anyone who'd like to play it in due time.

"The trip is a difficult one. I will not be myself when I reach you."-When I Reach Me.