Rain falls through an open window, scattering
Tiny sparkles in a persistent beat, while
Light shines through an open window, dancing
Across the sill on golden feet
Sounds creep through an open window, whispering
Myriad echoes of the world outside, while
Scents float through an open window, hinting
At fragile rose petals passing by
Wind blows through an open window, feeling
Swaying curtains flowing white, while
Frost sneaks through an open window, beckoning
Silent darkness to bring the night
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That's really great!
My bros and sis' are in bed but when I said the words in my mind they came off my tongue like music.
Thanks
This absolutely lovely, Timothy! :) Very beautiful.
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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa
neato! no idea what it
neato!
no idea what it means
but i know i likeeee!
:o)
Wow
Very, very pretty! I like it a lot. :)
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When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.
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I love it Timothy! You captured it perfectly. I could grasp the image easily, something that is hard to do unless the piece is written well. Keep it up!! :)
-Mamie