Oh, Wonder Why the Sun Fell:Chapter Twenty-Two and Twenty Three
Chapter Twenty-Two
He nodded.
Chapter Twenty-Two
He nodded.
Millie eyed the strange tag that was attached to the dress she was holding.
'Yes, I think you're right...' she said, peering closely at the ink jots on the faded paper. Then, she let out a strange shout, 'Hey, this one was first worn exactly forty years ago today!'
Hiya!
Well, I'm trying a new story. Hopefully I'll keep writing it. I've got a vague idea of what I want to happen, and what this story is about. As it goes on, it'll be clear just what "talents" means. Annnnddd....I'd love to hear your thoughts. Comments?? It helps immensely when ya'll comment, because knowing people are reading is SO encouraging. Thanks!!
-Homey ;D
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One: Running, Healing, and Aggressive Cops.
Millie sighed as she walked towards the edge of town. She had just finished a long day of sewing with the town's dressmaker. Tuesdays were always really hard days, and this was no exception. Not only were the hours long, but business in the shop was slow so that Millie had few excuses to leave her stitching to help customers. Now she was done. But instead of feeling relieved, she was far from it; she had yet to walk home in the bitter February cold.
And now we return to the beginning of the story; in February of 1933. I'm going to write this serial in tune with the months; hence whatever season it is in real life, so it shall be in the story!
...let me know what you think!
I am Aalen.
I am 16 years of age, and i live in a small city neighborhood.
I like thinking of stories and I like telling stories. I do not like writing them down. (too many speling erors)
When i think of a story the first thing i do is tell it to myself. then i tell it to my best friend.
I have created countless storylines, elements, mechanics, worlds, settings, multiverses and the like. but the one who helps me get them straight is my friend Leinad K. Romethe.
'How can this be?'
Millie turned an ashy white and sat down heavily on a nearby chair. Gianna placed a hand on her sister's shoulder and tried to look brave, though she was shaking and tears were still falling down her cheeks.
'Edward... what you are about to hear, you must not utter to a single soul.' Millie said, after an agonizing silence, 'It has been a long guarded secret of our family.'
I sat down next to her and looked earnestly at her.
'I promise you that I won't speak a word to anyone...'
I think she honestly didn't see me at first. Gianna was about to open her mouth to warn her of my presence as she came down the hill to meet her, but was stopped when Millie let out a cry of surprise.
'Edward! What... on earth!'
'No time to explain you see, kind of in a tough spot!' I shouted back, trying to concentrate again on the task at hand.
Here you go! Prolouge, part two! Be sure to visit my writing blog for pictures and updates, as well as side-stories that I plan on doing in the future!
www.charlieandmewrite.blogspot.com