somewhere in a faraway land
Where youth is never fading, and troubles are never invading
Where the sky is forever blue, and tears will never fall
Where is this mystical place you ask?
Somewhere in a strange and far off land perhaps?
Do not bother looking in the wood
It is neither in the sea nor the sky
It is nestled away safe and secure
It is somewhere in your mind
Comments
Thanks
Thank for the review, I'm new on this site so I appreciate any comments. I would also like to apologize for the numerous typos, and am correcting them, needless to say I'am sloppy when I type. Have to work on it.
Sweetness
I like it!!! It's very beautiful as is Alone =D
By the way, I think you should post your magic story. Fantasies are meant to have magic, and I think it would be great to post it =P
Falling Leaves-unschooler, horse lover, and obsesser over writing, reading and proper grammar.
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Thank you!!
Thank you for your compliment. And about that story, I might post it, It needs some clean up but, I'm working in it:)
Great!
Cool, good luck!
-Falling Leaves
"If life gives you lemons, throw them back!" -Joe Jonas (I think, or it might be another one of the AWESOME Jonas Brothers)
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
I like it. :)
I like it. :)
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief