my beginning

Submitted by sarahalisonstargirl on Tue, 07/07/2009 - 18:29

Thick.  Dark.  The clouds hung heavily over the dry field.  The parched grass crunched softly beneath her feet as she stood.  Waiting.  She could feel it coming, the soft breeze that twisted around her bare ankles, sliding gently up her legs, enticing, pulling. Stronger, stronger the rustling grass whispered, dancing with the sky, held captive by the earth.  She closed her eyes as it tugged at her hair, kissing her pale skin, creeping down her neck, sending shivers down her spine.  Beautiful. Lover.  Whispering of things to come. A smile stole across her lips.  With a mighty gust it came, surging across the field, bending the earth into submission as the orchestras of heaven fell from the sky.  Everything was pushed into motion, swaying as one beneath the darkness as her song drummed down onto the thirsty earth.  She opened her eyes and stared up into the sky, raising her hands into the rain.

And the thunder came. 

 

 

            “What in blue blazes happened to you?”  The first sound that met her ears as she shut the front door behind her.  Granddad was standing in the doorway, newspaper in hand, not looking as though he were in a very good mood.          

            “It...started raining,” she said, lamely.  He gestured with his pipe.

            “Yer drippin’ all over your grandmas rug,” he said ryley.  She looked down at the water pooling around her bare feet.  He followed her gaze.

            “Where’s your shoes?” She clutched the soggy pair of sneakers tightly to her chest.  He nodded gruffly. 

            “Go get dried off,” she dashed up the old stairs, “and then git back down here and clean up this mess.”  She swung the bedroom door shut, blocking out his voice.  Her shoes dropped to the floor as she opened the curtains on the window.  The world outside was misty and grey. 

            “Beautiful,”  she whispered.  Beautiful, beautiful...beautiful. She smiled to herself.  She picked up an old comb and ran it through her tangled red hair.  

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AMAZING!!!! Is there going to be more of this? It's so good!!!

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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

thanks :) i'm glad you liked it.

currently there is no more.... that was as far as i got. that's as far as i usually get, then i slap it into my blog, or set it up somewhere. 

i should continue.

but i haven't yet.

 

and.

 

old fashioned girll.... thats from the book, right/ louisa may alcott?? my fave.. :D

<3 (*)(X)

YAY! Someone like that book besides me!!!! Good for you, though I am sad that there's no more :(

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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

In my defence I hace checked it out from the library twice just never read it and I recognised the book in your user name right away.

Good job Sarah m'love. By the way if you ever find "The Sun/Moon Tatoo" you should post it. That would make Laura (and me) happy

thank you dear.  so.  i saw a tattoo the other day that looked like the one i imaigined, actually...but it turns out it wasn't a sun and moon, it's moon and star.

it's muslim.  so i guess i had unconsciously added a sub-plot.

or do you mean you actually want me to post the story...?