Sundancer

Submitted by playing4inspiration on Mon, 06/28/2010 - 19:29

 Across the leaves, the sun

Dances.

The rays of light brighten the

Dark.

Rain pours.

Flowers bloom.

A butterfly emerges.

A pond shimmers.

Petals float, catching the

Light.

Frolic.

Revel in the inescapable beauty.

Author's age when written
17
Genre

Comments

Wow good job! I like this a lot! Don't you just love Apricotpie! I'm in love with it!

Oh!!!!  Wheres my manners

"WELCOME TO APRICOTPIE!!!!!!!"  ♥♥♥

Good job

Write on!

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Aw, that was pretty :) excellent job.

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

 Thanks!  :)
I'm glad you liked it!  It's one of my first attempts at poetry, so I really appreciate your comments!

Omgosh you joined AP! YAYY! Welcome! Ooh thats so exciting! Another TG recruit...bwahahaha. We will take over! B-| hehe jk

And did I mention that I LOVE this?

 

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

TG stands for True Girls. It's an online bulletin board for Catholic girls. paperpoet, kit-kat, Clare, playing4inspiration and I are all on it. They originally heard about it from me so I like to think of them as my recruits. :-P

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

 that was beautiful! it's so descriptive and wonderful. I love it. I may be late in saying this but: Welcome to AP!!!! :-)