The sweetest things you said to me
What my heart wanted to hear
Your words like cotton candy
Were suger to my ears
The most beautiful things you said to me
That made my soul delight
Your words were like a candle
That gave the darkness light
The silliest things you said to me
Just to make me smile
About clouds being elephants
And a little bird named Lyle
The saddest things you said to me
Like when you said "Good bye"
Or "I never meant to hurt you,
I'm sorry I made you cry."
Of all the things you've said to me
Be them silly or true
The ones I'll always treaure most are
The three words: "I love you."
Comments
So good!
WOW! I loved this one! This is my favorite style of poetry! My favorite lines had to be the last part:
Of all the things you've said to me
Be them silly or true
The ones I'll always treasure most are
The three words: "I love you."
Like I said, so good! Keep posting more!
Beauti-ful
This was beautiful. It had such a wonderful flow to it.... I loved it. :)
I knew it!
Aha, it IS you! You should have said something on TG so I knew you were here! Anywho, lovely poem dear. :) Pretty much ditto to the others who have commented.
Katie:-)
"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS
Ohhh....
( clicking tounge, for some reason).
How nice! that was awsome!
very Aw-ing???
Its just so sweet!
It makes me want to cry! Ioved it!
I love all your poems.
Write On!!!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Aw, this was so sweet ;)
Aw, this was so sweet ;) fantastic.
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond